Sergii´s Portfolio need feedback

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Hi everyone :waving_hand:

I just launched my portfolio: a small island you can walk around. The projects
are boards out in the park, there’s a house you can go inside, and two
minigames with a shared leaderboard.

I have used TSL, Physics is Rapier, audio Howler.js, leaderboard Firebase, art
Blender.

There’s also a “Quick overview” button that opens the whole thing as a plain
page, for anyone who’d rather not load a 3D world.

https://sergii-butrii.com/

I’d really appreciate any opinions or feedback.
Thanks!

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Looks pretty, love the dissolve shader.

A few nitpicks:

  1. the camera angle at the starting location begs you to clip through the trees, which just feed awkward

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I would either change the camera pitch or mvoe those trees or make them shorter, to avoid this situation

  1. The controls explanations that you get require the user to already understand controls in order to get them. You need to know how to walk to walk up to it, and you need to press enter.

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  2. foot sliding

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Hi thanks for the feedfack really.
I understand the first point about the tree and i will change it. However the second point i am not that sure about it because it already exist a pop up if you dont move at all that shows you how to move in the world, and when you approach to the controller it appears the indicator of what to press depend of what are you using(it appears on your image), and i dont really know if it´s better to make like a an obligatory tutorial. Thank you again btw.

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Right, missed it

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I think 2 things here:

  1. place it below the character, not at the bottom of the page
  2. make it go away only when the player moves, otherwise keep it on screen